Senseless

ja, ich weiß ich bin ein trottel. hab gesehen, dass du auch deutsche FF's schreibst. nun gut. wie geschrieben: toll. trotzdem wär schön mal was von dir zu hören. k, bis dann. ( ich Baka!)

hmmm..,hi. I don't know whether you are an english person or not, so that's why I'm writting in english. It's strange that your FF hasn't at least one commentary. I found it yesterday and read it then of course. I think it's brilliant. Really, 29 sides in word and it never becomes boring. So I hope you will continue and the newt chapter will come soon. it's a pity that I couldn't get the 16th chapter, because I'm not 18 yet. it's cruel, isn't it? I hope you'll understand what I'm writting, because I have no idea whether my english is good or bad. I would looking forward for a note from you. (in the next chapter?). As I said: Keep going. (is this right?)

Die FF ist so schön >.<. Mal ein grund für mich besser in Englisch aufzupassen. Ich hab zwar nicht alles verstanden, aber das wichtige schon. Schreib bitte schnell weiter. ^^

Well, what to say. I've got a little problem. One word (adult) and three damned months are seperating me from
happiness.
It's so cruel: I've waited soo long for the continuation and now I'm not allowed to read it! PLEASE publish it on fanfiction.net, too or send me chapter 16 as soon as possible ( don't want to sound rude I'm just soo curious)!! (*_* fall down in front of you and begging)

^-^'try to write in English though I think my English isn't very well.
GREAT STORY! I've already read it on fanfiction.net so I know how it goes on but there I'm not able to log in so I coulden't write a comment. I like your story and I can't wait to see how it goes on (after chapter 15). PLEASE write on as qick as possible [ with happy end I hope; I'm always very depressed when the stories have such sad ends; By the way I love Krad so please don't treat him too bad (I'd like to see make peace with Satoshi)]. That was all I think. Just hurry up! (I'm a bit impatient I fear)