ich hab mir halt mal gedacht ich fass Marrons gedanken so zusammen wie ich sie verstanden hab... und weil mir grad danach war eben in englisch ^^
der text spielt nach dem 2ten band
hoffe es gefällt euch ^^
Marrons thoughts
Erstellt: 28.08.2008
Letzte Änderung: 15.09.2008
Letzte Änderung: 15.09.2008
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294 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
294 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Jeanne, die Kamikaze-Diebin
Hauptcharaktere: Maron Kusakabe / Jeanne, Chiaki Nagoya / Sindbad
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| Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
|---|---|---|---|
| Kapitel 1 Marrons thoughts | E: 28.08.2008 U: 15.09.2008 |
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Von: abgemeldet
01.09.2008 16:01
Nice and sweet (not too long and not too short) - these were my first impressions. x3
There were a few (2-3) typing mistakes I noticed, but that was not a big problem. ^^
Although it has surely been 2-3 years since I last watched KKJ, I could understand how Marron thought; your FF made me feel like I was directly in her heart. <3
Buuut, it would've been better if you had written a poem. I hope Marron doesn't think about everything in rhymes (XD) but I suppose that would've been better to express her feelings. ^^
There were a few (2-3) typing mistakes I noticed, but that was not a big problem. ^^
Although it has surely been 2-3 years since I last watched KKJ, I could understand how Marron thought; your FF made me feel like I was directly in her heart. <3
Buuut, it would've been better if you had written a poem. I hope Marron doesn't think about everything in rhymes (XD) but I suppose that would've been better to express her feelings. ^^
