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Dragon Ball R

The saiyans are back!
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Thema: Dragonball

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~komplette Fanfic~ V: 21.04.2014
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Von: abgemeldet
2015-06-04T20:52:13+00:00 04.06.2015 22:52
"It's pathetic that humans call this training" - and way too hilarious. Gosh, you really made me laugh! Somehow, I started with chapter nine instead of one (good news: you can easily read this one without any knowledge; only struggled during Bras story, because I expected Vegeta being mad about it? Guess, I'll check that), but no matter what, this was amazing. I never ever even dared to think about them joining the army and I bet, Mr Miller was about to cry. Those saiyans, horrible creatures. I really, really loved him (didn't want him to be my commander, you know?). Too bad he never realized his punishments were kinda nice behaviour towards saiyan-soldiers. No way about breaking them! Indeed, he shall be lucky not ending up in the hospital. :-)
Anyway, I wasn't able to decide which character was the one and only favorite this time. Gokus questions - no words! (Was he serious about the red cross? Couldn't stop laughing, almost dropped my cup of coffee...), Trunks was just a cutie (Oops, perfectly summed up everything in the woods), and Vegeta .. well, that's a royal man! Nobidy shall beat him up. I'm impressed, now I'm aware how one should answer a call. Guess, my heart's going out to him. ;)

So, although I would have loved to read "last two months" as long as the very first, I was quite happy about its content and ending. It includes many well-known tasks, funny speeches, and pointed out why army wouldn't be an option to saiyans. That's so far one of the very best Dragonball-chapters, I read in years. Keep up the good work!
Loves, Morgi
KomMission-Unterstützerin, für mehr Feedback auf Animexx :-)
Antwort von:  Lans13
05.06.2015 09:35
Wow, thank you very much for the review!
The army was among one of the ideas, I was playing with for quite many months, before I actually got to write it down. I think it would be way funny to have the saiyans as soldiers :) It's always hilarious imagining saiyans do "normal/human" things and sometimes, one or two of those "what if" scenarios are stuck with me and I just have to write them down.